Thursday, May 1, 2008

The Puppy is dead - Part II

Rahul displayed his ID card to the security person outside his office and rushed to the 10th floor of the building. He silently slipped into the work area. His eyes were frantically searching for her.

Finally his eyes fell upon the object of his search. His Love. She was dressed in a beautiful blue and white chudithar and her loosely coiled hair fell upon her shoulder. Rahul was dumbstruck. He felt an impulse to rush and hug her and kiss her on her cheeks. Controlling himself he sheepishly moved into the cubicle just behind hers.

Mahesh who had just spotted Rahul almost yelled his name. Rahul jumped across and firmly held his hands across Mahesh’s mouth. Rahul had moved with such pace that he almost toppled Mahesh from his chair.

He hissed at Mahesh and asked him to remain silent. Rahul’s voice was almost a whisper.

Rahul: Shhhh! I need help from you dude. No questions please. I need your PC for another 15 minutes. Take a break and be back and I can explain everything.

Mahesh: But! I have an urgent work to…

Rahul: Please dude! Just 15 mins.

Mahesh: Rahul had helped him a lot and he could not say a ‘No’ to Rahul. He silently left the place half curious and half puzzled. While all this happened, Anjali and her friends had settled in their cubicle. There seemed a buzz around the entire place.

He slowly placed the guitar at the desk and logged into Mahesh’s pc. “The game starts now” he thought to himself.

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He logged into the messenger with his id and pinged her.

Rahul: Hi! Anjali!

Anjali: Hello! Good Afternoon. What’s up weirdo? (Rahul could hear her giggling in her cubicle as she typed in the reply)

Rahul: Nothing. Just relieved and happy that my project is finally going for a release tom :-)

Anjali: Wow! Treat! You had worked very hard and I am sure it would be a big success.

Rahul: Yeah! I am hoping the same. So how’s your work going along?

Anjali: Not great yaar! Stuck up with coding for one of the screens.

Rahul: How about a cup of coffee?

Anjali: Coffee? Have you come here to Pune?

Rahul: Nope. (He put in a coffee cup symbol over the messenger and chuckled while doing so).

Anjali: Hey weirdo! Can you help me out in fixing up the error if you aren’t too busy?

Rahul: Sure! Tell me the screen where you’ve got stuck up.

Rahul got up slightly and saw Pooja and Lavanya entering Anjali’s cube. He immediately ducked down and slid himself in his chair.

“Hey Anju! Common! Wind up your work fast. It’s your b’day today and we had planned to leave early today” uttered Pooja.

“Yeah! I also don’t feel like working today. But I am stuck up in a screen” replied Anjali.

Rahul: Hello! Will you tell me the place or screen pls…

“So what’s the puppy saying? Wagging its tail? Huh” asked Pooja.

“Must be waiting for the biscuits I suppose,” told Lavanya as she joined the conversation.

Just as Lavanya said this all three broke into a loud laughter.

Rahul was puzzled by this conversation and could not decipher what they were talking about.

“So what are you waiting for when you have the pup at your disposal. An intelligent pup, I must say. Just ask him to code the screen for you” told Pooja.

“Yeah! Throw him two additional smilies in the messenger and he would be happy to do the entire coding for you” added Lavanya.

Rahul could not believe what he was hearing.

Anjali: Hey weirdo! I am not feeling well today :( Can you do the coding for the Balance Screen alone?

Rahul’s hands were trembling and he was too shocked to reply.

Rahul: Just a min. (he forced himself to reply)

Anjali: Please dear! I have a doctor’s appointment today and need to leave early.

“Here goes the second biscuit,” told Pooja as she laughed

Rahul was in a state of complete disbelief. Tears started rolling down his eyes. It seemed to him as if the entire world was spinning.

“Wish I had one pup too. Can you check if the pup can help with my work too” told Lavanya and the three broke into laughter again.

Rahul was sobbing now with tears all over his cheeks. He still could not believe what was happening.

“The pup seems a little reluctant today. Guess he needs more cajoling today” told Anjali.

And this statement seemed to be the final nail on his coffin. He grunted in agony and pain.

“The puppy is dead’ he typed into the messenger window and silently slipped out of the place.

He seemed to be caught in a sea of emotions and he didn’t even notice Mahesh who was returning back with a cup of coffee. He took the elevator to the terrace.

Anjali finally saw the reply on the messenger window and was puzzled. She pulled the other two and showed them the reply.

“But how could he have known? Had he been here?” questioned Pooja.

“He actually asked me over for a cup of coffee initially but then put up a coffee mug icon over the msgr” replied Anjali.

Just as they were pondering, Mahesh entered his cubicle. He saw the guitar placed over his desk with a rose stuck between the strings and a card by its side.

Just as he slipped open the card, a faint musical note “Happy Birthday to you” resonated from within. This caught the attention of Anjali and others as they turned back and moved into Mahesh’s cubicle.

“To Anjali!

Wishing you many more happy returns of the day!

With Love

Rahul” read the card.

Mahesh passed over the card to Anjali!

She slipped open the card, and was dumbstruck not knowing what to do next. The faint b’day note was playing in the background.

Mahesh now got a grip of the situation but couldn’t still understand why Rahul left abruptly.

Rahul was crying over aloud in the terrace punching the wall with his fists. He never expected this to happen. He had decided to tell his love for her today and he was a bit apprehensive over her response.

What hurt him more was the way she had considered him. As a mere utilizable commodity! “The puppy is dead! Its dead” he shouted as he kept landing punches on the wall. His knuckles were swollen and a taint of blood appeared over them.

His mobile rang all of a sudden. He was in no mood to talk to anyone. As he pulled up the mobile from his pocket he saw that it was his mother calling.

He slowly pressed the answer button.

“Beta! How are you? What happened?” uttered his mother.

He wanted to tell her all that happened and for a moment wished that she were by his side. But words failed to come out from his mouth and it seemed as if a lump was stuck in his throat.

There was a long silence and he finally managed to speak. “I am fine ma” he replied.

“It wasn’t your fault beta!” she told as if reading his mind.

“You loved her from the core of your heart. If she didn’t like you, it’s her who’s missing a wonderful person. It does hurt and I can understand. But remember that you have a person who is missing you a lot. Please come back home tonight for dinner” saying this she ended the call.

Her words comforted him and he felt a lot better. He wiped down his tears and kept staring at the heaven. Just then he received another call. It was Anjali calling.

He wanted to smash the mobile against the wall and his blood was surging with anger. He controlled his emotions and pressed the answer button.

“ I am really sorry Rahul! It was all meant to be fun and I never wanted to hurt you.” she said.

“The little pup loved you from all its heart. But it’s dead and buried now! Goodbye.” saying this he ended the call.

Anjali tried calling Rahul again but he didn’t attend the call. He switched off his mobile as he took the elevator to ground floor. He checked out of office and boarded a taxi to the airport.
P.S - This is my first attempt at writing a love story. Bouquets and brickbats are welcome :)

9 comments:

Zendagi Migzara said...

Dude, this story seems to be too real to be imaginative. Was this Rahul character supposed to be you???

I hope I am not intruding too much..

Very touching...

lefty84 said...

@ Sheena: The story was not entirely imaginative and has some elements of truth and reality hidden within.

All I can say is more than 70% of the story was a figament of imagination only.

And you certainly didn't intrude by any means
Cheers
Lefty

Phoenix said...

Hey
Just read both parts. Nice story, nicely written. So feel for the guys' feelings, girls can be soooo bitchy.

Anonymous said...

hey sri..
it was mindblowing..so touching that i am sitting here cursing with all my heart...
please bring the pup back to life and get him to meet a cute little kitten and make him all smiles..
please do so..
it is a request from a concerned reader of rahul's agony and pain
..
you have written it as a professional,,not even for a second it made me bored and nothing was repetitive not even th core concept..
it is a breeze of fresh air in the crowd of so many sob stories about love and and the pain it causes...
i am a big fan of rahul's mom already.. :)

Anonymous said...

sitting here cursing anjali i mean :)

lefty84 said...

@ Phoenix: Thanks for reading and letting in your view mate. I can't completely agree over your view of the girls. The character's mom is a girl too. There are some exceptions on either side
Cheers
Lefty

lefty84 said...

@ Appu: Thanks a lot for your words of encouragement. Get a cute little kitten for the puppy..Lol :-)

I am glad that the story was interesting throughout and made a good read.
Don't curse Anjali yaar! It could be the case of Rahul misinterpreting her friendship too. Its just an episode that I tried to project here with reality and I left a lot of open ends regarding their relationship for the reader to assume.

And I love the mom's character of all others in the story too. Welcome to the club. :-)

Cheers
Lefty

Sam said...

Gr8 man
Really an interesting story,more than that i loved ur way of shaping it up in words.
I won't blame the girl completely,she might not have taken the relationship seriously as much as the boy had.It seems the boy hadn't kept his eyes & ears open,both at a time.
Well all i can say about the puppy thing,Its quite natural because most of us live dual life.One is the real us,which becomes active when we are with someone whom we are emotionally attached to, & other one almost fake,when we are with our cool friends.Its upto individual how he/she manage to keep both untouched with the another one.The girl failed to do that.
Using someone or taking help from someone is not bad, infact its good for a relationship to grow (if any).Things go wrong when there is none.
Waiting for more from you.
Keep writing

lefty84 said...

@ Sam: Thanks for your words or encouragement dude!
U hit the nail on the head - Even I didn't want to project the girl in the wrong frame here. I just narrated a sequence of happening.
The boy may even have mis-interpreted the affection shown by her. He was unhappy not because he was rejected but because he was seen not as a friend but as an utilizable commodity.
Cheers
Lefty

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